Trying to protect his students' innocence
he told them the Ice Age was really just
the Chilly Age, a period of a million years
when everyone had to wear sweaters.
And the Stone Age became the Gravel Age,
named after the long driveways of the time.
The Spanish Inquisition was nothing more
than an outbreak of questions such as
"How far is it from here to Madrid?"
"What do you call the matador's hat?"
The War of the Roses took place in a garden,
and the Enola Gay dropped one tiny atom on Japan.
The children would leave his classroom
for the playground to torment the weak
and the smart,
mussing up their hair and breaking their glasses,
while he gathered up his notes and walked home
past flower beds and white picket fences,
wondering if they would believe that soldiers
in the Boer War told long, rambling stories
designed to make the enemy nod off.
In "The History Teacher" by Billy Collins, history repeats itself. The constant lies and deceptions, hiding what is really going on in the world, allows similar events to reoccur. Each stanza consists of a period or event in history where the truth is being kept from the students for their "own good." Collins uses clever ways to try and prove a point- each important part in history is mentioned, and then he tries to cover it up with something "silly" or irrelevant. Collins points out that by hiding the truth, the history teacher will be able to protect his students' innocence; however, from this poem, one can argue that the history teacher is simply trying to "hide" the truth and teach his students to "seek" the truth on their own and not live by what others tell them.
A thesis statement can be more than one sentence but in this case you are summarizing or trying to analyse the poem without giving an actual thesis. Some of the wording in this paragraph lost me a little bit.Overall the paragraph is well written but i believes it lacks an actuall thesis statement.
ReplyDelete